When the days got short and the nights crisp, the animals came to the horse meadow. Mostly they came to eat the persimmons off the tree. Long retired to the meadow, the horse shared his only tree because he wanted to watch the visitors.
The raccoons came at night. Once when it was raining, they came during the day as if the raindrops hid their bandit ways. The mama raccoon led the parade with her back rolling up
and down. She headed straight from the forested side of the fence to the exposed persimmon tree. Three black-faced kits followed her nose-to-tail when they first entered the open area, but then they scrambled aside to inspect a gopher mound, and soon they were cuffing each other and rolling in the dirt capsules and bits of broken pottery brought up by the gophers after every rainstorm. At a snarl from their mother, they tumbled back into line when a car went by on the country road.
and down. She headed straight from the forested side of the fence to the exposed persimmon tree. Three black-faced kits followed her nose-to-tail when they first entered the open area, but then they scrambled aside to inspect a gopher mound, and soon they were cuffing each other and rolling in the dirt capsules and bits of broken pottery brought up by the gophers after every rainstorm. At a snarl from their mother, they tumbled back into line when a car went by on the country road.
The raccoons swarmed up the tree and spread out to different branches to get the choicest persimmons - those that had ripened but not fallen and were not chewed by other animals. As the harvest nights went by and there were less persimmons to choose from, the mama raccoon nudged the lighter kits farther out on the branch tips.They gripped the bent branch with three dark hands, and with long black fingers of the last hand swatted at the dangling globe until it fell to the ground where it was pounced on by one of the other kits. At least once a night, a kit fell from the tree with a soft thunk and then bubbly purring started up from under and in the tree until the little one scrabbled back up and into the family’s designated position.
Dark-eyed junco |
Hummingbird at the persimmon tree |
Red-breasted sapsucker |
The does brought their fawns that had survived the summer to taste persimmons for the first time. The fawns had lost their spots. As they wandered farther from the doe, they met other family groups under the persimmon tree and bumped the sides of neighbor fawns or played tag with the yearling does that had rejoined the matriarchal herd. Adventurous in the changing landscape, they tasted everything, wet shrubs, fence posts, bits of blown litter, falling leaves, but mostly they watched the does to see what was best to eat. The does gracefully nosed a fallen persimmon, opened their long narrow mouths to bite into its wide girth and lifted the orb to shoulder height where they chomped and swallowed with juice running down their furred chin and orange pieces falling out to the sides. At first, the fawns couldn’t get their little mouths around a whole persimmon and they chased it round and round on the ground. Eventually they either snacked on the bits falling out of the does’ mouths, or they found mushy persimmons that were easy to bite into. As the fawns got the hang of eating fallen persimmons, the does stood up on their hind legs to pick fruit from the tree branches and a mouthful of leaves too.
Black-tailed deer at night |
The horse rarely saw the coyote but he knew it was visiting the persimmon tree. It must be sneaking into the meadow at dusk or dawn while the horse was dozing. But it always left its calling cards - scat packed with bright orange persimmon skin, and paw prints with nail marks and belly rubs in the muddy path where it slipped under the barbwire fence from the direction of the farmhouse. The horse vaguely remembered hearing the ranch dogs barking at night; perhaps the coyote was teasing them about its own omnivore diet while they were chained to buildings and packaged food.
The horse ate as many persimmons as he wanted off the ground during the day. He kept the persimmon tree well trimmed during the summer so that there were more branch tips to produce fruit in the fall. Persimmons were his second favorite fall harvest. A few weeks ago, the farmer dumped a load of straw bales from his flat wagon. Those bales always smelled of denim and were littered with bits of candy wrappers. That was his favorite fall taste because it never changed and reminded him of his mother biting loose the cord on the bales when he was a young colt to release the pressed and faded green leaves in the center as the bales split open. But he also liked the persimmons for the special reason that every year they brought so many animal visitors who shared the plentiful orange fruit from the single tree in his meadow.
Coyote sneaking down a persimmon |
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This story started out as a One-Hour Story. A One-Hour Story is when you sit down with an idea in mind and you write as fast and as much as you can in one hour. When the timer goes off, you stop and see what you've got. The idea is to write without inhibition and get those ideas and words flowing. If you like what you've started, you can come back to it later and develop it some more. I originally wrote this One-Hour Story for my niece on her birthday last fall. Yesterday, while rolling pie dough for the family Thanksgiving dinner, I was watching the birds in the persimmon tree and remembered this story. I pulled it out, revised and wrote some more and here it is. Happy Thanksgiving.
An hour well spent.
ReplyDeleteGood stuff. You may find this blog post of mine from 2 years ago inspiring for a follow-up next year. :)
ReplyDeleteWow, randomtruth, that's a cool sky cam you got in the apple tree. I'm trying that next.
ReplyDeleteExcellent Thanksgiving post! And thank you for this blog -- I love it [and randomtruth's, too].
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